October 2010
2 posts
Unbalanced Lyrics
Last week’s lesson in lyric writing was about unbalancing. Unbalanced phrases give a sense of being unsettled in a passage so it’s a good way to set up a chorus or a bridge. This is the bit I submitted on Friday. I was pretty uninspired, but I like the way it came out.
Outside the ground is frozen Hard like a stone I can see it through the ice crystals on my window Outside the...